A thought experiment


Here's a thought experiment.

You are a VC.
About to start yet another meeting with a startup that reached out. It’s your third today - your seventh this week.

After a couple of minutes of small talk, one of the founders connects their laptop and hits “Present.”

You lean back in your chair, ready to listen.

Now pause.

What do you hope happens next?

What could the founder say or do that will make you go:
"Yes! This is the one. Not the team from the previous meeting. Not one of the other 22 I've seen this month. This is where I should invest."

Can you think of anything?
If yes, hit reply. I'd love to hear it.


Yours,
Sagi
__________

P.S.

Every week, I help one startup with their most pressing communication challenge - free of charge.

It’s my way of meeting new people, staying sharp, and supporting teams who may not yet have the budget for deeper work.

Know a founder that needs a nudge in the right direction?
Feel free to pass this along. They can see examples or submit a request here.

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